Name:Timothy Teo Hong Da
Class:1E1
Draft 3(Figurative Languages)
"I can do it! I definitely can do it! It isn't something difficult!" I thought to myself when I am facing one maths question during PSLE.
Mdm Faezah(my maths teacher) have taught me once the solution of the question which I don't know how to answer but I just can't remember the concepts and steps for it.
However I did not gave up, I tried and tried my best to answer the questions and finally I got the answer which I have confident in. But I am still not sure if I am able to get a good grades for my maths and as well as others subjects such as English, Science and Mother Tongue.
I am so worried about my grades but I just can't do anything about it because is already after PSLE but one day which is on the releasing of the PSLE results day, my face was as pale as a ghost and perspirations rolls down my cheeks on the day at first but it slowly... slowly started to stop when I open and took a look on my results with my parents and I am glad that I am able to get at least more than 190.
After the PSLE results were out few days later my parents had allowed me to go out together with my friends in my primary school so I hang out with them every time whenever I am free.
Thursday 6 February 2014
Struggles and how I overcame it (Draft 2)
Name:Timothy Teo Hong Da
Class:1E1
Draft 2(Paragraphing)
"I can do it! I definitely can do it! It isn't something difficult!" I thought to myself when I am facing one maths question during PSLE. Mdm Faezah(my maths teacher) have taught me once the solution of the question which I don't know how to answer but I just can't remember the concepts and steps for it.
However I did not gave up, I tried and tried my best to answer the questions and finally I got the answer which I have confident in. But I am still not sure if I am able to get a good grades for my maths and as well as others subjects such as English, Science and Mother Tongue.
I am so worried about my grades but I just can't do anything about it because is already after PSLE but one day which is on the releasing of the PSLE results day I am so worried and perspired a lot on the day at first but it started to stop when I open and took a look on my results with my parents and I am glad that I am able to get at least more than 190.
After the PSLE results were out few days later my parents allowed me to go out together with my friends in my primary school so I hang out with them every time whenever I am free.
Class:1E1
Draft 2(Paragraphing)
"I can do it! I definitely can do it! It isn't something difficult!" I thought to myself when I am facing one maths question during PSLE. Mdm Faezah(my maths teacher) have taught me once the solution of the question which I don't know how to answer but I just can't remember the concepts and steps for it.
However I did not gave up, I tried and tried my best to answer the questions and finally I got the answer which I have confident in. But I am still not sure if I am able to get a good grades for my maths and as well as others subjects such as English, Science and Mother Tongue.
I am so worried about my grades but I just can't do anything about it because is already after PSLE but one day which is on the releasing of the PSLE results day I am so worried and perspired a lot on the day at first but it started to stop when I open and took a look on my results with my parents and I am glad that I am able to get at least more than 190.
After the PSLE results were out few days later my parents allowed me to go out together with my friends in my primary school so I hang out with them every time whenever I am free.
Wednesday 5 February 2014
The story of a jacket (Draft3)
Name:Timothy Teo Hong Da
Class:1E1
Draft 3(Figurative Languages)
"I know I may be a normal jacket to you but you can't just abandoned me like that!! You would never be able to understand or feel how I felt!" I cried to myself. The story of a jacket actually happens like this...
I am a normal jacket which had been hanged in a jacket shop for sales and for about 12 years. Those peoples that came in to the shop to buy jackets but I am never going to be the jacket that they are always looking for and the jackets they are looking for is jackets with lots of cool patterns on them but I am just a plain grey and white jacket.
But on one fateful day, there's a beautiful girl which is about 12 years old came in the shop with some of her friends. I thought to myself that she will definitely not want to buy me because I am very plain and she wouldn't wants me at all. But what I thought was actually different to what happens in reality.
She took me out from the hanger and brought me to the cashier and bought me. "I can't believe it!! She chosen me." She brought me home and washed me thoroughly and after that she sewed a word 'Winnie' on me. I wondered, is her name Winnie? I am right when I saw the same name on a textbook on top of her study table.
After that she sewed another name with a heart shape in between her name and another name. The name 'Timothy' was sewed on me and she told me that from today onwards my name will be known as Timothy. On that day I realized that I have actually fell in love with her.
I finally know why she bought me as her favourite colours are grey and white as almost all the furniture and other stuffs in her room is grey and white. I have spent almost 1 year together with her and she have wore me for about 1 year too.
But on one day, 28 December, she saw a small hole on my right arm and she told me "Eww... Why is there such a hole on you, you are so disgusting." I was so shocked as her attitudes towards me had changes a lot. On that day, she threw me away into the recycling bins nearby her house.
I cried terribly everyday and I actually still missed her. But I have made some new friends too in the recycling bin like shirt, pant and blanket and the same tragedy happens to them too like me and they all looks new as well but they were abandoned.
They cheered me up everyday when they saw me cried and they all tried their best to make me happy and they told me that they all manage to forget the owners and they told me to forget her too. Everyday I spent my time taking to them but I still miss the day we spent together with her. I am waiting for her to comeback to the recycling bin and bring me home and treat me liked how she did last time. I always wanted her but I knows very well that she would actually returned back to look for me.
Class:1E1
Draft 3(Figurative Languages)
"I know I may be a normal jacket to you but you can't just abandoned me like that!! You would never be able to understand or feel how I felt!" I cried to myself. The story of a jacket actually happens like this...
I am a normal jacket which had been hanged in a jacket shop for sales and for about 12 years. Those peoples that came in to the shop to buy jackets but I am never going to be the jacket that they are always looking for and the jackets they are looking for is jackets with lots of cool patterns on them but I am just a plain grey and white jacket.
But on one fateful day, there's a beautiful girl which is about 12 years old came in the shop with some of her friends. I thought to myself that she will definitely not want to buy me because I am very plain and she wouldn't wants me at all. But what I thought was actually different to what happens in reality.
She took me out from the hanger and brought me to the cashier and bought me. "I can't believe it!! She chosen me." She brought me home and washed me thoroughly and after that she sewed a word 'Winnie' on me. I wondered, is her name Winnie? I am right when I saw the same name on a textbook on top of her study table.
After that she sewed another name with a heart shape in between her name and another name. The name 'Timothy' was sewed on me and she told me that from today onwards my name will be known as Timothy. On that day I realized that I have actually fell in love with her.
I finally know why she bought me as her favourite colours are grey and white as almost all the furniture and other stuffs in her room is grey and white. I have spent almost 1 year together with her and she have wore me for about 1 year too.
But on one day, 28 December, she saw a small hole on my right arm and she told me "Eww... Why is there such a hole on you, you are so disgusting." I was so shocked as her attitudes towards me had changes a lot. On that day, she threw me away into the recycling bins nearby her house.
I cried terribly everyday and I actually still missed her. But I have made some new friends too in the recycling bin like shirt, pant and blanket and the same tragedy happens to them too like me and they all looks new as well but they were abandoned.
They cheered me up everyday when they saw me cried and they all tried their best to make me happy and they told me that they all manage to forget the owners and they told me to forget her too. Everyday I spent my time taking to them but I still miss the day we spent together with her. I am waiting for her to comeback to the recycling bin and bring me home and treat me liked how she did last time. I always wanted her but I knows very well that she would actually returned back to look for me.
The story of a jacket (Draft2)
Name:Timothy Teo Hong Da
Class:1E1
Draft 2(Paragraphing)
"I know I may be a normal jacket to you but you can't just abandoned me like that!! You would never be able to understand or feel how I felt!" I cried to myself. The story of a jacket actually happens like this...
I am a normal jacket which had been hanged in a jacket shop for sales and for about 12 years. Those peoples that came in to the shop to buy jackets but I am never going to be the jacket that they are always looking for and the jackets they are looking for is jackets with lots of cool patterns on them but I am just a plain grey and white jacket.
But on one fateful day, there's a beautiful girl which is about 12 years old came in the shop with some of her friends. I thought to myself that she will definitely not want to buy me because I am very plain and she wouldn't wants me at all. But what I thought was actually different to what happens in reality.
She took me out from the hanger and brought me to the cashier and bought me. "I can't believe it!! She chosen me." She brought me home and washed me thoroughly and after that she sewed a word 'Winnie' on me. I wondered, is her name Winnie? I am right when I saw the same name on a textbook on top of her study table.
After that she sewed another name with a heart shape in between her name and another name. The name 'Timothy' was sewed on me and she told me that from today onwards my name will be known as Timothy. On that day I realized that I have actually fell in love with her.
I finally know why she bought me as her favourite colours are grey and white as almost all the furniture and other stuffs in her room is grey and white. I have spent almost 1 year together with her and she have wore me for about 1 year too.
But on one day, 28 December, she saw a small hole on my right arm and she told me "Eww... Why is there such a hole on you, you are so disgusting." I was so shocked as her attitudes towards me had changes a lot. On that day, she threw me away into the recycling bins nearby her house.
I cried terribly everyday and I actually still missed her. But I have made some new friends too in the recycling bin like shirt, pant and blanket and the same tragedy happens to them too like me and they all looks new as well but they were abandoned.
They cheered me up everyday when they saw me cried and they all tried their best to make me happy and they told me that they all manage to forget the owners and they told me to forget her too. Everyday I spent my time taking to them but I still miss the day we spent together with her. I am waiting for her to comeback to the recycling bin and bring me home and treat me liked how she did last time. I always wanted her but I knows very well that she would actually returned back to look for me.
Class:1E1
Draft 2(Paragraphing)
"I know I may be a normal jacket to you but you can't just abandoned me like that!! You would never be able to understand or feel how I felt!" I cried to myself. The story of a jacket actually happens like this...
I am a normal jacket which had been hanged in a jacket shop for sales and for about 12 years. Those peoples that came in to the shop to buy jackets but I am never going to be the jacket that they are always looking for and the jackets they are looking for is jackets with lots of cool patterns on them but I am just a plain grey and white jacket.
But on one fateful day, there's a beautiful girl which is about 12 years old came in the shop with some of her friends. I thought to myself that she will definitely not want to buy me because I am very plain and she wouldn't wants me at all. But what I thought was actually different to what happens in reality.
She took me out from the hanger and brought me to the cashier and bought me. "I can't believe it!! She chosen me." She brought me home and washed me thoroughly and after that she sewed a word 'Winnie' on me. I wondered, is her name Winnie? I am right when I saw the same name on a textbook on top of her study table.
After that she sewed another name with a heart shape in between her name and another name. The name 'Timothy' was sewed on me and she told me that from today onwards my name will be known as Timothy. On that day I realized that I have actually fell in love with her.
I finally know why she bought me as her favourite colours are grey and white as almost all the furniture and other stuffs in her room is grey and white. I have spent almost 1 year together with her and she have wore me for about 1 year too.
But on one day, 28 December, she saw a small hole on my right arm and she told me "Eww... Why is there such a hole on you, you are so disgusting." I was so shocked as her attitudes towards me had changes a lot. On that day, she threw me away into the recycling bins nearby her house.
I cried terribly everyday and I actually still missed her. But I have made some new friends too in the recycling bin like shirt, pant and blanket and the same tragedy happens to them too like me and they all looks new as well but they were abandoned.
They cheered me up everyday when they saw me cried and they all tried their best to make me happy and they told me that they all manage to forget the owners and they told me to forget her too. Everyday I spent my time taking to them but I still miss the day we spent together with her. I am waiting for her to comeback to the recycling bin and bring me home and treat me liked how she did last time. I always wanted her but I knows very well that she would actually returned back to look for me.
Monday 3 February 2014
Letter to sibling
Name:Timothy Teo Hong Da
Class:1E1
Draft 2
Address:
Block 469
Ang Mo Kio Ave 10
#11-930
S560469
Dear Bryan,
I would like to tell you about how I feel about the little India riot. I felt very unsafe nowadays with people from other country especially from India. Not that I despise them but you actually will not know what they really think.
The Indians shouldn't do that as Singapore is one of the most strictest law in the world and this is the first time.I really despise their actions, like why create trouble? Why do they not want peace?What's exactly in their mind? Did we actually offended them somehow and somewhere or something else if not?
I hope none of this riots will actually happen again as there's no point in doing so and I believe most of the Singaporeans will not forgive them.
Love,
Timothy
Class:1E1
Draft 2
Address:
Block 469
Ang Mo Kio Ave 10
#11-930
S560469
Dear Bryan,
I would like to tell you about how I feel about the little India riot. I felt very unsafe nowadays with people from other country especially from India. Not that I despise them but you actually will not know what they really think.
The Indians shouldn't do that as Singapore is one of the most strictest law in the world and this is the first time.I really despise their actions, like why create trouble? Why do they not want peace?What's exactly in their mind? Did we actually offended them somehow and somewhere or something else if not?
I hope none of this riots will actually happen again as there's no point in doing so and I believe most of the Singaporeans will not forgive them.
Love,
Timothy
Saturday 1 February 2014
Letter to sibling
Name:Timothy Teo Hong Da
Class:1E1
Draft 1
Dear Bryan,
I would like to tell you about how I feel about the little India riot. I felt very unsafe nowadays with people from other country especially from India. Not that I despise them but you actually will not know what they really think.
The Indians shouldn't do that as Singapore is one of the most strictest law in the world and this is the first time.I really despise their actions, like why create trouble? Why do they not want peace?
What's exactly in the mind? Did we actually offended them somehow and somewhere or something else if not? I hope none of this riots will actually happen again as there's no point in doing so and I believe most of the Singaporeans will not forgive them.
Love,
Timothy
Class:1E1
Draft 1
Dear Bryan,
I would like to tell you about how I feel about the little India riot. I felt very unsafe nowadays with people from other country especially from India. Not that I despise them but you actually will not know what they really think.
The Indians shouldn't do that as Singapore is one of the most strictest law in the world and this is the first time.I really despise their actions, like why create trouble? Why do they not want peace?
What's exactly in the mind? Did we actually offended them somehow and somewhere or something else if not? I hope none of this riots will actually happen again as there's no point in doing so and I believe most of the Singaporeans will not forgive them.
Love,
Timothy
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